I'm going to be catching up on some old posts I've been meaning to write, and hopefully that will help me get back into a regular schedule. So here goes...
Dipping back a full month to the E3 press conferences, Joystiq wrote the following about Tony Hawk and the introduction of Natal:
But Microsoft's John Schappert he likely wasn't caught by surprise.
There is definitely something missing here. At a minimum a verb - "John Schappert says/claims/announces/etc." Perhaps a more formal "according to John Schappert..." Either way, something is wrong with this sentence.
Source: http://www.joystiq.com/2009/06/03/activision-got-the-heads-up-about-project-natal/
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